melagan ([info]melagan) wrote in [info]mcsheplets,
Author:[info]melagan
Title:Family Ties
Pairing: John/Rodney
Rating: G
Prompt # 79 - Family
Beta: [info]mischief5
Mistakes:mine




John balled his fist and shook with tension as he contained the urge to strike. He refused to give in and punch the wall. He’d had a bellyful of that when he was a morphing into a bug. He was human, damn it. He just had to hang on until Rodney could find an answer.

In John’s opinion, the Ancients weren’t worth the credit given to them. They’d unleashed all kinds of nasty things into the Pegasus galaxy for their personal motives. Just for starters, there was the Wraith with their enzyme addicts, the Asurans, the Travelers… Okay, maybe they weren’t inherently evil, but John was adding them to his list. He wasn’t feeling particularly fond of them after being tied up so many times for no good reason.

Oh yeah, then there was the little matter of leftover unattended and highly dangerous technology. That was near the top of John’s list, too. Because of them, Rodney had accidentally destroyed most of solar system. It was sheer luck that it hadn’t been inhabited at the time.

Nope, the Ancients didn’t seem to have much conscience when it came to putting their toys away when they were done. Messy, messy. They could have used a father like John’s. That would have taught them…. John sighed, unclenched his fist, and shook the tension out his hand.

He was getting off the point. The point was, two days ago, Carson used his own Ancient gene to perfect and fine-tune the med lab’s DNA scanner. Almost the first thing he’d done was to run all of John’s team through it. Rodney to check on his artificial gene, Teyla for her Wraith DNA, and Ronon because he’d refused to be left out of whatever the rest of his team had to go through.

John he’d done because of the damn gene. Okay, and possibly to check for changes due to being bugified and fed on and then fed on in reverse, or as Rodney liked to call it: regurgitated.

However you looked at it, the Ancients were shifty bastards and too busy looking after their own skins to care about what kind of consequences they were leaving behind for the humans in this galaxy. Now, thanks to Carson, he’d just found out he was one of them. A 100% Ancient throwback bastard.

He knew that it was foolish to think that Rodney could come up with some way to deAncientfy him, but McKay’s pulled miracles out of his ass before. John had never wanted to be less associated with ‘family’ in his life.


There had to be some way to make this better. This went way beyond giving him the creeps. He couldn’t bury the worry that he had something written into his DNA that he couldn’t fight. Some time bomb of arrogant assholeness that would one day make him want to abandon everything and everyone he loved. He had seen too much of what the Anicents had left behind, seen it hurt too many people, and it was not a risk he was willing to take.

John pulled the six-pack out of fridge, considered his options, and then pulled out a second six-pack. He grabbed up a blanket and shoved a pillow under his arm. They didn’t do manly cuddles every pier night but right now, having McKay to steady him was exactly what he needed. One of the best things about Rodney was that he wouldn’t say anything; he’d just look at the pillow and know. John blew out a sigh of relief and headed for the pier.

Rodney would be there. He had to be, even if he didn’t have any answers yet for John. It was where they always met when one of them had a rotten day. No matter what kind of tricks John’s wacky DNA did to him, he could depend on Rodney.

Just the same, he couldn’t help feel relieved to see Rodney sitting on the pier waiting for him.

“Hey. I wondered when you’d…two six-packs, John? I thought it was just in-law bad or Carson’s taking the team off-duty bad. I didn’t realize this was flying into a sun and nuclear level bad.”

John grumped back at him. “Family sucks.”

“Ah yes, family.” Rodney gave John a little half smile. “Guess this was what Chaya meant when she said, ‘You’re not as different as you think.’ Oh god, this doesn’t make her your sister, does it?”

“No! God, Rodney, no.” John shuddered. “That’s more ‘ewww’ than I brought beer for. Never mention that again.”

“Hey, stop looking so freaked out.” Rodney pulled on John’s arm to encourage him to sit down beside him. They sat there for a few quiet minutes, swinging their legs over the edge, appreciating the stars and cold beer.

Rodney bumped his shoulder against John’s. “Well, you know, she’d be your much, much, much older sister. That has to count for something.”

John glared back, getting a cheeky grin from Rodney in response. It made it hard to resist the tug of a smile he could feel on his own face.

“Seriously, John, I think you’re making too big of deal of it. It’s not like any of us get to pick our family.”

“They were assholes, McKay. They might have started out with good intentions but they left a hell of a mess behind. It’s like that story thing, curiosity got the better of her and she opened it, releasing all the misfortunes of mankind.”

“Pandora’s Box?”

“Yeah, just like that. Hey, maybe that’s where the story comes from; someone was trying to explain the Ancients’ fuck-ups.”

“Okay. No more beer for you Colonel.”

John scowled at him. “I’ve only had two, Rodney.”

“Yes. Two and you’re already getting maudlin and whiny. That is not a good look on you. Has it occurred to you that it could be a gift? Just think about how much more you can do now that you know the City was designed for you.”

“Well, I wouldn’t mind seeing someone like Captain Helia just try to take Atlantis away from us again. Bitch.”

“See? That’s the spirit. We should see how much power we can get out of the weapons chair too. I wouldn’t be surprised if we could get all kinds of things initialized that we haven’t been able to before.”

“Me. You mean how much I can.”

“I mean me too.” Rodney waved his hand in front of John’s face. “You get it online and I’ll take it from there.”

“Like partners.”

“Yes!”

“You’ll watch my back and make sure I don’t do any evil…ancienty crap?”

“Me, Ronon, and Teyla. We’ve got you covered, John. Now, will you just relax?”

“They abandoned this galaxy. You don’t leave your people behind, Rodney, and that’s exactly what they did.”

When Rodney’s arm came up around John and tugged him closer, he went with it. For just a few minutes, he let his head rest on his friend’s shoulder while Rodney ran careful fingers through his hair.

“John? You left out part of the story. The world remained bleak until Pandora ‘chanced’ to revisit the box again; she opened it and Hope fluttered out.

“I don’t believe it’s an accident and I don’t buy into the idea that you’re a throwback, John. I think the Ancients made it possible for you or someone like you to be born and…I’m not trying sound Quantum Leapish about it but I think you’re here to right some of those wrongs they left behind.” Rodney gave him a little shake. “You’re too good for anything else.”

The words were unnerving and John curled a fist into Rodney’s shirt, holding on tighter. He wasn’t ever going to tell McKay he found his warmth and smell and smart mouth comforting, but he wasn’t letting go of him until he had to, either.

“What are you saying, Rodney? You think my being here is some kind of plan?”

“John, everything about you, your integrity, your loyalty, your dedication to leaving no one behind... I think you’re the Ancients’ version of Hope.”

Tags: author: melagan, challenge: 79 - family, rating: g

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[info]mischief5

September 7 2010, 02:58:12 UTC 1 year ago

Lovely! I really like the idea of John being the embodiment of hope!

[info]melagan

September 7 2010, 03:10:40 UTC 1 year ago

Thank you m'dear.

I had the idea for that months ago so it was nice to have a prompt that I could fit it with.

[info]roni_rae

10 months ago

[info]melagan

10 months ago

[info]helenkacan

September 7 2010, 03:27:34 UTC 1 year ago

“What are you saying, Rodney? You think my being here is some kind of plan?”

“John, everything about you, your integrity, your loyalty, your dedication to leaving no one behind... I think you’re the Ancients’ version of Hope.”
Whoa!!! When Rodney uses that big-brain-of-his for philosophy, he really comes up with a grand unified theory of John Sheppard!

OTOH,
He wasn’t feeling particularly fond of them after being tied up so many times for no good reason.
you made me laugh - quite inadvertently here - because of the implication that there could be times for him to be tied up with a good reason.

But anyway ... awwwwwwwwwww.

[info]melagan

September 8 2010, 01:15:02 UTC 1 year ago

Hee grand unified theory of John Sheppard! - I like it!

because of the implication that there could be times for him to be tied up with a good reason.

... I can't actually deny that. *g*

[info]ribbon_purple

September 7 2010, 03:30:29 UTC 1 year ago

Love the last line!

Very good, my dear.

[info]melagan

September 8 2010, 01:17:34 UTC 1 year ago

Thank you hon. It was one of those ideas that wouldn't leave me alone once I'd thought of it.

[info]mezzo_cammin

September 7 2010, 03:39:22 UTC 1 year ago

He wasn’t ever going to tell McKay he found his warmth and smell and smart mouth comforting, but he wasn’t letting go of him until he had to, either.

Oh, John.

This was lovely, all the way through. And John as the Ancients' version of Hope is just perfect.

[info]melagan

September 8 2010, 01:19:23 UTC 1 year ago

Thank you.

I get a little schmoopy with the boys. You probably noticed *g*

[info]danceswithgary

September 7 2010, 03:44:54 UTC 1 year ago

Oh, I liked this explanation! :-D

[info]melagan

September 8 2010, 01:21:57 UTC 1 year ago

I wanted a different take on 'John is an Ancient' from what we usually read

and the idea of John as the Hope of the Pegasus galaxy was irresistible to me.

[info]soryu

September 7 2010, 06:49:01 UTC 1 year ago

That was so wonderful and warm and...*happy sigh* Thank you.

[info]melagan

September 8 2010, 01:23:04 UTC 1 year ago

Aww, you're very welcome. I'm glad you liked it.

[info]tarlanx

September 7 2010, 07:05:43 UTC 1 year ago

Lovely story :) Like the idea of John being 'hope'.

[info]melagan

September 8 2010, 01:24:05 UTC 1 year ago

Thank you so much!

[info]ed263

September 7 2010, 11:08:47 UTC 1 year ago

Thanks for a warm, fuzzy, and well written story! Love how Rodney is able to use his big brain to comfort John! Love how you incorporated Pandora's Box story..very appropriate! Thanks again for a wonderful story!

[info]melagan

September 8 2010, 01:28:57 UTC 1 year ago

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

[info]sarcarmic

September 7 2010, 14:33:28 UTC 1 year ago

Echoing the chorus here: the last line is truly a thing of beauty.

[info]melagan

September 8 2010, 01:31:35 UTC 1 year ago

Thank you! I've a wicked fondness for the last line myself. *shoulderbumps*

[info]antares04a

September 7 2010, 19:24:29 UTC 1 year ago

Very nice! I like the warmth in this story and the way Rodney can give John hope that it is isn't as bad as it seems at the first moment.

And I liked this line very much: They could have used a father like John’s. That would have taught them...*lol*

[info]melagan

September 8 2010, 01:37:39 UTC 1 year ago

Heee, that's what you get when the prompt is 'Family'.

Thanks hon. I can't picture Rodney (and the rest of the team) not being there for John. I'm delighted you enjoyed it.



[info]kiraalexia

September 7 2010, 20:54:58 UTC 1 year ago

Very sweet and lovely. John being "hope" for the galaxy it's a great thought.

[info]melagan

September 8 2010, 01:39:36 UTC 1 year ago

It makes me smile to picture it. It's even a little plausible with the way things work in Pegasus *g*

[info]neevebrody

September 7 2010, 22:18:54 UTC 1 year ago

This is just wonderful. I love the corollary with Pandora's Box and John being 'Hope' to counter all the crap the Ancients left behind. Very fitting.

[info]melagan

September 8 2010, 01:27:42 UTC 1 year ago

Thank you hon. I knew I wanted to do this for awhile. I think I might have just made John the most precious commodity the Pegasus galaxy owns. Hmmm, I know there's a story in there somewhere. You should probably write it for me. *bats eyelashes*

[info]gyri

September 8 2010, 01:52:14 UTC 1 year ago

Awwwwww. I love how Rodney supports and fortifies John, and his hypothesis at the end.

And

Bugified! Regurgitated!!

*slaps knee and guffaws*

[info]melagan

September 8 2010, 01:53:55 UTC 1 year ago

*snerk* You just know this is how a lot of their conversations go *g*

[info]kensieg

September 8 2010, 10:57:55 UTC 1 year ago

awwwww! love this story! It was definitely worth waiting for!! This is perfect! I love how being Ancient doesn't isolate John and how he's still the John we know but with extra dimension to him. I love everything in this story; the wordplay and how John is Hope for Pegasus galaxy.


Thank you so much for this wonderful story!

[info]melagan

September 9 2010, 01:13:27 UTC 1 year ago


...how he's still the John we know but with extra dimension to him.

Yes, exactly this!

[info]gottalovev

September 9 2010, 14:11:59 UTC 1 year ago

d'awww, I love great Rodney is to poor brooding!john. very sweet. love the Pandora box analogy!

[info]melagan

September 22 2010, 11:44:35 UTC 1 year ago

\o/ \o/ \o/ Thank you.

[info]djaddict

September 10 2010, 04:09:33 UTC 1 year ago

At the risk of sounding like a teenager or something...

That was really cool!

[info]melagan

September 22 2010, 11:45:06 UTC 1 year ago

*happydances*

[info]tlyna

September 22 2010, 07:55:19 UTC 1 year ago

Very beautifully written. John's torment over finding out he was one of those beings he hated and Rodney's willingness to reach out and help him through this. I loved the obvious depth of feeling between John and Rodney. That last line was an absolutely perfect ending.

[info]melagan

September 22 2010, 11:45:49 UTC 1 year ago

Thank you so much.

[info]tarlanx

April 25 2011, 08:07:26 UTC 1 year ago

Lovely ficlet! And yes, I think John is the Ancients' equivalent of Hope!

[info]melagan

April 25 2011, 11:21:12 UTC 1 year ago

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. You know...I wouldn't mind reading more about AncientHope John ;)
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